"When you started to describe how Daniel's breathing grew ragged, how his ball sack got all tight and wrinkly, I was really confused. You said his nuts were churning. Nuts don't churn. They just hang there until you come. What did you say that for?"

Thanks for that erotic story Matt. It turned me on. Sorry I couldn't make it to Sanwich like I said I would. I blame Kim.

"So after Jack started long-dicking Daniel then you said Daniel was panting. Then Jack reached a hand around Daniel and took the panting man's cock into his own hand. I don’t think Jack would do that! Daniel would surely slap his hand away."

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